Examing a student 4 and 6 source essay
Looking over the sample four-source essay and sample six-source essay (attached). As noted, these essays are not perfect. The author is still working to synthesize the sources. However, the 6 source essay adds some new sources and other improvements. After reading over the two articles, please answer the following questions: How has the author improved, or changed, the material from the 4 source essay to the 6 source essay? What sources has she added? What effect do the new source(s) have on the paper? Pick a paragraph section of the 6 source draft where synthesis needs to be improved, such as paragraph 3, and add an appropriate transitional phrase/sentence.